After receving the feed back on the animaitc I decided to take on the storyboards myself as I wanted the chance to improve my filmic langauge. The work Jen produced was very much valued in getting the project going and now feel the narrative is stronger and more character driven then previously.
I have created some new boards which intergrate the new feedback form my tutors, Jen's boards and my own ideas. these new boards can be found in this post: http://rebeccameilakfmp.weebly.com/story-boards/new-boards
I have created some new boards which intergrate the new feedback form my tutors, Jen's boards and my own ideas. these new boards can be found in this post: http://rebeccameilakfmp.weebly.com/story-boards/new-boards